Analysis of Sample Proposals

1. Extortion
+introduced the topic well.
+discusses the solution in detail.
-gets a little confusing with the money cost.
-targets students and their parents, some parents do not pay for their children's college.
Off-campus purchases
+introduce the problem well
+have all three things needed (problem, solution, justification)
-only focus on women, when they could bring men to the audience as well.
-the university would be losing money out of this deal
Nuclear Power
+good evidence
+addresses counter-arguements
-brief introduction of the problem
-costs

1. Nuclear Power
2. Extortion
3. Off-campus purchases

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